~~~~The reporters are allowed in the courtroom where the trial is taking place~~~~
Mr. Pig: "Ladies and gentleman, your honor, Mr. Wolf, also known as "The Big Bad Wolf" of the jungle, ate my two older brothers and tried to eat my but thankfully my house was built with bricks and iron so I managed to survive"
Mr. Wolf: "I have done no such thing, I am very kind and friendly, in fact I was good friends with the mother of Mr. Pig's family, who has died recently from illness."
Mr. Pig: "That is a LIE! Our mother had warned us all to stay away from you because you will try to eat us and you managed to eat my two brothers because their houses were not strong enough to keep you out!"
Mr. Wolf: "That is not true at all, I actually helped your brothers build their houses. I think you are making accusations towards me because you are going through a tough time. Maybe it was you who killed your brothers out of jealousy."
~~~~The courtroom is shocked after Mr. Wolf's last response~~~~
Mr. Pig: "That is an absolute lie, I loved my brothers and have always been close to them, I would never even think about hurting them! You are just mad because you couldn't eat me HA HA HA HA HA (mocking) look at you making excuses to save yourself, PATHETIC!"
Just as Mr. Pig said that, Mr. Wolf lost his cool and couldn't hold his anger anymore so he charged at Mr. Pig in an attempt to eat him while saying: "You are right and now I will get my wish and eat you too MUAHAHAHAHAHA!" As Mr. Wolf got near Mr. Pig four police officers held him down and cuffed him.
The Judge: "Very well then Mr. Wolf it is clear that all accusations against you were try and you also tried to eat Mr. Pig in front of everyone. You are charged with the murder of Mr. Pigs two brothers, and an attempt to murder Mr. Pig himself. Now take the wolf away and lock him up for good!"
Reporter: "Oh my god, did everyone see what just happened? Well all I can say is goodbye Mr. Wolf, into jail you go to pay for your crimes. This is Jonathan and you saw this trial live only at CNN. Thank You for joining us!"
~~~~Mr. Pig, still sad about the loss of his brothers but happy that justice is served and Mr. Wolf is sentenced to life in prison, goes home and lives a normal life without any fear of Mr. Wolf.~~~~
~~~~THE END~~~
7 comments:
Good story. I like the way there was a "MUAHAHAH" and that it has a happy ending. I also liked the fact that the wolf didn't get to eat the third pig in front of everyone, at least one pig should stay alive=)
Interesting writing. There is a climax of the story when the wolf was provoked and attempted to eat the pig at the court,but after all, the last pig was not eaten.You successfully thrill the readers' hearts. Enjoyed reading it.
This story has a happy eding. Finally, Wolf was punished for all his crimes he caused to the Pigs. I like the way how these two murder and victim faced to faced, and we can see the feeling of each character.
I loved the way you started the story. It made the story professional and mysterious. The steps and the presentation of the story impressed me a lot. The dialogues of the Wolf and Mr. Pig are very remarkable. The story line and the ending impressed me a lot.
I like your starting.I think, you have attracted reader by your starting.Second thing you kept alive third pig that make your story interesting.You make happy ending that third pig got the right judgement.that Transition between starting and eniding is very nice.I liked it.
Its a very interesting story it seems very thoughtful and creative. I also like the fact that the wolf was brought to justice and he didnt get to eat the remaining pig.
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