Monkey Roberto (reporter): Thanks to my fellow audience for watching the animal news. Today’s trial is one of the most important ones in the history of this town. The richest wolf in town, Walfie Mark has been accused of eating alive the well known two little pigs, Kafu and Steven Bacon.
According to Ronny, the youngest brother of the two missing little pigs, the only enemy the family had was Wolfie Mark, who was often seen threatening those two little pigs for not paying the last three months of rent which were past due.
Now Ronny is going to declare in front of the court room of Animal Land
Ronny Bacon (Youngest brother): Three days ago I went to visit my brother’s house; I knocked and knocked at the door and no one answered it. I was really scared about the safety of my two brothers so I decided to break into the house. Once I was in the house I saw blood everywhere; that terrible scene made me throw up. I was crying desperately thinking the worst happened to my brothers. I searched around the whole house and finally came to the conclusion someone killed my lovely brothers.
I know the one that killed my brothers was Wolfie Mark.
Based on my brother’s neighbors, Wolfie Mark opened the door of the house with his own keys, as you may know my brothers were renting one of Mark’s properties. Neighbors heard Wolfie Mark screaming like crazy at my brothers demanding to be paid for the past three months of rent. He was threatening them by saying; I will eat you alive if you don’t pay me. I am so hungry and you guys look delicious! The argument went on for almost thirty minutes until the neighbors felt a sudden silent
Judge: Well Wolfie Mark, now it is your turn, what you have to say in your defense?
Wolfie Mark: I did not eat those two bastards’ pigs, they did not want to pay my rent and I hated them but I did not kill them.
Judge: So how do you explain that your stomach grew so big in just three days? And I have found you haven’t eaten in days due to indigestion problems. The whole town knows you love to eat! I am claiming you guilty for eating those poor little pigs.
Monkey Roberto (reporter): As you see my dear viewers the Judge has heard both Ronny Bacon and Wolfie Mark and his verdict has been set, claiming the only suspect guilty. The case has been resolved and justice was made!
The whole town cried aloud with emotion about the news. Now all the rich animals in town know better that justice exists and they will pay for their homicides. Wolfie Mark was sentenced to life prison and no meat, his favorite meal, will be served for lunch or dinner.
7 comments:
Hey Sara,
Just finished reading the post. Very nicely done in naming the characters. It had a certain ring to it and made it that much more enjoyable to read. If only real court cases in today's world were that easy and handled that quickly, I think the world would have been a better place. In any case, a very easy and exciting peace to read and keep up the good work.
This was cool because it made you feel like you were watching the news. I felt as if this was like the reporters at the O.J. simpson trial. Except this was a monkey on the steps getting all of the accounts of the Three Little Pig Trials. Very well put!
Great trial report. I really liked the situation of the trial with wolf as rich landlord. I especially liked the sentence at the end, "life with no meat!" Also the description of the town's rich animals now know that there will be justice. Great job!
I liked your trial report because the big bad wolf got to do what I would have done if I was angry. The pigs deserved what he deserved for not paying the rent. Although I would not realy kill someone for their rent, it was nice to see it done on paper.
Excellent job, Sara.
I like your story for 3 reasons:
1. I think that I have the same thought as you do, if my guess is not wrong, that the wolf should be punished because he DID cause the two little pigs to die, even if unintentionally according to Wolf's saying, no matter for what excuses it had. It were certainly not the pigs themselve’s sneezes which fell their houses down but the wolf’s. They would not die if the wolf didn’t come to their house, and they have rights to reject the wolf, even not politely.
2. You assigned the roles in the courtroom to different animals, which is very creative, funny, and entertaining in my opinion, and it matches the environment of animal world so well.
3. Short paragraphs make your story very clear and easy to read and understand.
Hi Sara,
Great story Sara. I love the renting argument. It fits perfect into the story as the main purpose of the crime. As we see today, most crimes are due to Money conflits. It is the only think that drives people crazy and make then do ilegal acts. We probably will act as the wolf did in your story if we were animals. Nice Job.
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