Lion king: who waked me up? You better have something let me thinking. Life without thinking is unchallengeable. Our forest has been keep peace for so long. Anyone who broken this peace must pay.
Little Pig: Are you the Lion king? (saying with the tears)
Lion King: yes, my son. I am the most powerful king in the forest and I am fairness to everyone. Come on, and speak up, I don’t have all day. I have to go back to my dream. The old men always tire. (lion king close his eyes and want to go back to sleep)
Little Pig: King, please bring me justice and fairness. The Wolf destroyed my two brothers’ houses and ate them alive, and he also attempted to eat me. Now, I became a poor little pig living the world alone.
Lion King: Don’t worry my son. I am gonna give you justice after I heard what the wolf would say.
Little Pig: Don’t, my king, you don’t have to hear anything from the wolf. We all know that he is the biggest liar in our forest. He can make the white become black by only using the words.
Lion King: No, my son, I can’t send anyone to death without hear any confession from themselves. Detective Tiger, please, bring me the wolf.
Detective Tiger: Yes, your honor.
(…)
My king the wolf is here. (bring the wolf with a handcuff)
Lion King: (to the wolf) Is it true that you ate little pig’s two brothers?
The Wolf: Yes, your honor, I ate the two pigs, but I am innocent. I have confession need to make.
Lion King: You can speak it out. I am the king, and I will bring justice to everyone.
The Wolf: Your honor, I destroyed the two houses that little pig’s brothers made, because I wanted them to notice that sticks and bricks can’t use to build the house. If anything happen likes earthquake or storm, those houses will break at first time. They probably will bury in their own houses like that. Don’t you think that is a kind of tragedy which bury in the houses build by they own. For this reason, I blew the houses down.
Lion King: Sounds like an understandable reason. Thank you, my good citizen. If everyone like you, we would not lose so many our kinds in Haitian forest.
The Wolf: (make a bow to Lion King)
Little Pig: He is a liar, such a big liar. He ate my brothers. He ate my brothers. (Little Pig screaming out)
Lion King: Silence, Silence. I am gonna bring justice. (To the Wolf) do you have anything to say?
The Wolf: Yes, my lord. I wasn’t attempted to eat them. I just wanted to warn them about the houses, but they didn’t listen. After I blew the houses down, they instead thank me but attack me with pigs’ teeth.
My king, I am so innocent. Maybe I did something wrong, but I was from a good intension. I shouldn’t eat them for defense myself. I should dead before their teeth. My king, please, punishes me for the warning I given, sends me to death for the good intension I had. I have nothing else to say.
Lion Kind: My good citizen, I will not punish for what you did. On the other hand, I will give you a reward for whatever you want.
The Wolf: My king, I should thank you for bring me justice and fairness. I will always be your good citizen. I don’t want any reward. I only want you give a little warning for the false charge that Little Pig did to me.
Lion Kind: Don’t worry, my son, you are free to go. I will punish Little Pig. He will be my lunch today.
Little Pig: I...I…I wanna my mom. Crying….
4 comments:
Reading your story is very enjoyable and also reminded me with the story of Lion King, but in different theme. In your story you made it clear that the wolf is very wise and telling the king about everything thats related with the murderer of the two little pigs. I can even visualized by reading the statement when the wolf had been attacked by the pigs. It looks like the wolf was trying to tell the truth and also willing to be punished by the king. This story is just unbelieveable, as we know that in reality, its so rare having people that are willing to be punished when they felt that they are the innocent ones. They probably might have defend themself for the rights. the finishing touch of the story was funny, because who would have thought, if the Lion is going to eat the third little pig.
It's a fun read because you give the trial format a jungle feel (Lion as the judge, Tiger as the detective). However,some of the details are not very reasonable, for example the reason why the Wolf ate the two pigs. I would say if I were the Lion I wouldn't believe what the Wolf said. But the ending was so entertaining! I love how you show the true self of the Lion: yes, it's a judge and the king of the jungle, it's just still a predator.
Interesting story. I agree with the previous comment and the story also reminded me about the Lion King. Having saw the Lion King and Madagascar, I kind expected the lion to wise. So I thought it was a twist in the story when the lion actually drop the charges against the wolf and punished the pig.
This also somewhat reminded me about the story Tartuffe, where Tartuffe admitted that he solicited Orgon's wife but Orgon wouldn't believe a single word. Here we have the wolf openly admit that he killed the two pigs but the Lion believe it was for a good cause.
The ending was amusing to read because who would had thought that when the Lion said he will punish the pig, he meant eating him.
Really funny ending! The wolf in your story reminds me with the story of Tartuffe! The wolf is a hyporcite! He made up his own story and tried to persuade the line king. He also asked the king to punish him which can won sympathy and support from him. Unfortunetely, the lion king is so stupid who totally believed the wolf statement and finally made an unfair judgement! The little pig was so poor; he was not only misunderstood by the unfair judge but also eaten by him. SO FUNNY!
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