We are in Jamaica Courthouse in Queens. Judge Michael Grey came to the courtroom and case started.
Prosecutor: This is the murder case that two little pigs whose had eaten by Mr. Wolf. The wolf sentences to in prison twenty years.
Mr. Pig was there too. Whose two young cousins were killed by Mr. Wolf. Prosecutor wants to listen to Mr. Pig as a witness.
Trial started. Prosecutor asked Mr. Wolf tell us what happened on May 27, 2009.
Mr. Wolf: It was a beautiful day. I got up early in the morning. I wanted to make a birthday cake for my granny’s birthday. I searched Google to figure out how to make a cake. I wrote it down the ingredients. I started to get whatever I want it on the kitchen counter. I realized that I did not have any sugar at home. I went to a supermarket, but it was closed. I came back to home. Suddenly I understand why I should not ask my neighbor? I took a small cup and walked toward nearest neighbors house. I knocked the door couple of times, but no one opened the door. I took a walk around the house and I looked from the window. Little Pig was lying down in the kitchen. I got inside the house and checked the Pig’s pulse. Pig did not have a heartbeat. He was dead. OMG! i know I should have called 911 but, then I realized why I should call. Pig was dead anyway, then i decided to eat him and I started to eat the little Pig. I did not kill him. When I found him,he was dead.
Prosecutor: Can you prove that Pig was dead when you found him? You should have called 911 first to take the Pig to the emergency room. What about second Pig? What happened to him? Why did you eat him?
Mr. Wolf: After I eat the little Pig flesh, I lied down in the house couple of hours. I took a nap then, I got up noon. I went back home. I recognized that I needed some sugar for birthday cake I went to the other neighbors house. I knocked the door couple of times. While I was knocking the door, Pig was coming to home. While he was crossing the street, a car hit him. I run to help the Pig. He was extremely bleeding, he died in that time. I was shocked. I did not know what to do. Then I decided to eat him too. I ate this one too.
Mr. Pig yelled at the wolf real loudly. I know, you killed them because they did not listen to you. They sometimes came to in front of your house to eat your garbage and when they messed up your garbage bag, you got crazy many times. Thatsway, you killed and ate them. You are a killer you should go to jail and never get out again.
Mr. Wolf started defense himself: No I did not kill them. They were dead and, I ate them. I did not kill anybody. Mr. Pig is my neighbor but he is a liar. I warned him couple of times. He used to come my garden and mass up my garbage bag and throw them all over the place all the time. I politely told him to not to do it. Now, he is blaming me as a murder. This is terrible. He warned me for noise last year. He said I made noise and I stopped to make noise. I treated him the way I want to be treated. But today he blames me. Do onto others as you would have done onto yourself. Yes Honor. Whatever I said it happened like that. I am innocent.
Honor: Decision everybody stand up. Case Dismissed. Mr. Wolf is not guilty.
4 comments:
I like your story very much, it sounds like the Mr.Wolf got good reasons to eat them, and there is nothing to do with Mr.wolf about pigs died by accident.
It is a cute story but I think you should had explained or included something about their houses, as it was a key factor of how it was made of.
I liked that she situated the trial in the present day, using modern day routines to describe wolf’s actions. I also liked that the fact that she completely relieved the wolf of any faults. However, there were a few grammatical errors in her paper, such as awkward sentence formation and significant lack of punctuation. I also disliked that she used abbreviations. It made her work to appear in an unprofessional light.
I like your story a lot, your ending is similar to mine which lets Mr. Wolf out of punishment. You really give good reason to let readers believe that Mr. Wolf is not guilty. However, shouldn't Mr. Wolf let Mr. Newton Pig know about his brothers' death before swallow his family's bodies?
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